I have had sometime to go and truly think about our world’s technology.
I think that we have truly reached the top of tops when creating new and improved
items to cell to the public. I have tried thinking of ways to improve my Galaxy
S III but I can’t even think of a single thing because I am already so content
with all the features it already has! But they have already made a new version
to my phone rather quickly and now I hear talks about them going and making a
new NEW one of my phones. I think its almost crazy that we are juts pumping out
new new new stuff almost every month, whether it tends to be cars, games,
phones, tablets, and homes. There is always something that is more new than what
you seemingly just got. I found a video one YouTube demonstrating new technology
that is up and coming for 2014. This truly blew my mind and make me deeply
think will the world every be content with what they have?
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hkEVl87sBMI
You have built the intro for this post and provided some background but you do not connect this to the video you mention. There is no consideration of why this video is relevant or meaningful. You need to discuss it specifically, pulling out pieces to analyze, to help connect this post and its purpose to your reader.
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