This may see a little childish to go and blog about but I want
to go and vent to you for a minute is that okay blog readers?
Okay sweet thanks for your approval! Now this vent is not
like you standard I hate this, I hate that kind of vent. But this vent may seem
foolish but I wanted to take a second out of today to go and share how much I truly
enjoy Disneyland! It has been the vacation I have looked forward to since I can
remember! My family would pile into our old big ‘ol Suburban and hit the I-10
going West. But recently I just came back from my own little Disney excursion
with my now fiancé and her best friend and boyfriend. But the feeling of the atmosphere
when you even come close to these giant parks is one in a million of feelings. From
when your first get out of the car and the morning is dark grey due to the
heavy cloud coverage and the smell or popcorn and churros, to the gobs of
people smiling and trying to take in this wonderful place. But this is one of
my favorite places in the world, even thought I haven’t been all of the world I think it will still
be high in my books due to my family love and tradition it has wrapped all over
me. And now my fiancé KJ has the same
love for it too, not just because of me and my family but because of her own
love for. People call us Disney freaks and I think that is to far of a name for
us. We really enjoy D-Land but not THATTTTT much. If you have never been I advise
you to go. For my advice also try to not go through the summer of spring
months, it tends to be extremely busy in that part of the year. But I suggest
that you go in the fall times, the park is very low compared to the warmer months! I mean come on the slogan is: "Happiest Place on Earth!"
You make a lot of effort to infuse your voice & personality into your writing in these posts which is great. Beyond just explaining why Disney is attractive to you here, you need to find a way to relate it to the readers to pull them in, engage them, and help them see the relevance of this topic in their own lives. That is the next step for you in your posts. Think critically and force yourself to find connections to real-life situations that reveal the significance of what you are analyzing.
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